少少文法上的更正!thx

This TV commerical has just mentioned that the post in
the office is a female manager, that women's position
in this century is being upgraded as seen.

This TV advertisement just mentioned the female is a manageress, which indicates that position of female is upgrading in this century. (nowadays)

This TV advertising just mentions the female in the office post is a manager(manageress), so we can see females in this century are upgraded.

1. This TV advertising 是單數,mention 要 + s ;
2. manager　可用 manageress;
3. so= 所以; so that =引致
4. so we can see females (很多女性) are upgraded(被提升)
5.century = 世紀;

This commercial exactly mentions that the position of the lady in the office is Manager. We can see the status of female in this centuary is higher.