急急急救！！my favourite teacher 唔該幫我﹏唔該﹏

第一個答題者有太多「大小階」錯誤。
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My Favourite Teacher
(1) My favourite teacher is Miss Poon.
Miss Poon is myprimary school teacher.
She taught me Chinese.
She was beautiful and had long hair. She had small
eyes with glasses. She was tall and strong.

(2) Miss Poon looked like a kind princess. She always
smiled at her students. She liked to tell students funny
stories and jokes. Sometimes, she would like to give
students presents when they were well-behaved.
She was kind and friendly to give students chances
to improve their homework. She seldom used
punishment to teach students. She is the best teacher
who I know and this is why I like her so much.

(3) Miss Poon is a good teacher. I hope she
can be my Chinese teacher in the coming school
year.
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你寫
I hope she will be teach me Chinese language the next year.
是有文法錯。
will be teach是應寫作 will teach (Simple future tense).
the next year應寫作 next year.

應=== I hope she will teach me Chinese next year.


2008-04-04 00:28:46 補充：
第二句, 貼左, 無分開。 應寫如下：

Miss Poon is my primary school teacher.