1.Nothing is important than to receive education.
2.Hong Kong children are lucky to have12 year’s free education.
3.We should cherish our opportunities to study at school since somebody cannot receive education, especially for poor countries such Africa children.
4.The main reason is that children’s families are very poor, they cannot provide opportunities for their children go to school.
5.Although we have lots of precious opportunities to go to school, many children are not treasure their chances.
6.They prefer use their free time to play computer games or watching television programmers.
7.They only want to get more and more entertainments, gradually neglect their studies.
8.In my opinion, everyone can use their free time to do them favorite things.
9.It can release their pressure as after their have heavy workload.
10.As we know that our future careers depend on our academic results.
11.It is because our society is competitive one of the city around the world.
12.All of us should know that reality is reality, dream is dream.
13.Do not waste your time to do things that are bad for you.
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2008-04-01 3:15 am
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2008-04-01 9:42 pm
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The possible corrections to correct the above sentences are:1. Nothing is more important than to recieve education.
2. Hong Kong children are lucky that they have 12 years of free educational scheme.
3.We should cherish our opportunities to study at school since many people cannot receive education, especially in poor countries such as African children.
4.The main reason is that those children's families are very poor, they cannot afford for them to go to school.
5.Although we have lots of precious opportunities to go to school, many children are not treasuring their chances.
6.They prefer to use their free time to play computer games or watching television programmes.
7.They only want to get more and more entertainments, gradually neglecting their studies.
8.In my opinion, everyone can use their free time to do their favorite things.
9.It can release their heavy workload pressure after they have finished their work.
10. As we know that our future careers will depend on our academic results.
11. It is because our society is one of the most competitive cities of the world.
12. no problem
13. no problem
參考: my own writing
2008-04-01 9:38 am
1. Nothing is important than having education.
2. Hong Kong children are lucky that they have 12-year-free education.
3. We should cherish our opportunities to study at school since some children cannot have good education, especially the children which are live in those poor countries such as Africa.
4. The main reason is because those families are very poor and they don not have enough money to let their children go to school.
5. Although we have got a lot of precious opportunities to go to school, there are still many children do not treasuue their chances.
6. They prefer to play computer games or watch television programmes in free time.
7. They only focus on entertainments, they want more and more fun, gradually neglect their studies.
8. In my opinion, everyone can use their free time to do their favourite things.
9. It could released their pressure as they finished heavy work.
10. As we know, our future careers depend on the academic results we have got now.
11. It is because Hong Kong is one of the competitive city over the world.
12. Cannot think about what problem it has got.
13. Cannot think about what problem it has got.
Hope that they are correct.
2. Hong Kong children are lucky that they have 12-year-free education.
3. We should cherish our opportunities to study at school since some children cannot have good education, especially the children which are live in those poor countries such as Africa.
4. The main reason is because those families are very poor and they don not have enough money to let their children go to school.
5. Although we have got a lot of precious opportunities to go to school, there are still many children do not treasuue their chances.
6. They prefer to play computer games or watch television programmes in free time.
7. They only focus on entertainments, they want more and more fun, gradually neglect their studies.
8. In my opinion, everyone can use their free time to do their favourite things.
9. It could released their pressure as they finished heavy work.
10. As we know, our future careers depend on the academic results we have got now.
11. It is because Hong Kong is one of the competitive city over the world.
12. Cannot think about what problem it has got.
13. Cannot think about what problem it has got.
Hope that they are correct.
參考: by myself
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