請幫我改這篇英文(好簡單的)

有錯的我用（）來告訴你

My name is XXX,1.(I was graduate of university of XXX in china), 2.(my
subject is accounting) , I have two years experience of accounting, .3(if you
accept my applicant) ,4.(I can go to work at once.) At last, 5.(Thanks you for
your interview, i wish that I can see you again.)

1. I was graduate in XXX university in China
2. My subject in the university is accounting.
3. I hope you will accept my application
4. 這一句不要
5. Thanks for giving me a chance to interview, I wish we'll have a chance to
meet you again.

如果是用來interview的話，第一句應該是說Good Morning 或Good
afternoon

可能有一些錯處，但我也希望能幫到你

2008-03-31 17:18:51 補充：
I have two years experience in accounting

My name is XXX,I was graduate in university of XXX in china, my subject is accounting .I have two years experience of accounting, if you accept my applicant ,I can go to work at once. At last, thank you for your interview, i wish that I can see you again.
Ok .no proplem!!