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To attract more audience, especially for the younger
generation, ATV should perform some innovative
programs, which feature the Hong Kong's characteristic,
bringing Hong Kong to a uniqueness. Simultaneously,
the programms should be designed as letting audience,
including more young people, to gather together in
participating the events.

To attract more young audience, ATV should broadcast more innovative programs. These programs should feature Hong Kong's characteristic in order to show the uniqueness of Hong Kong. On the other hand, the audience, especially young people, can be more engaging in these programs.

To attract the younger generations, ATV should introduce innovative programs that feature the Hong Kong's characteristics, bringing Hong Kong to a uniqueness. Broadcasters should create programs that young people can gather and participate.

為了吸引年輕一代,亞視應該製作一些創新的節目,強調香港的特色,以帶出香港的獨特性.同時建議觀眾特別是年輕的觀眾可以眾在一起參加這個節目