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Your school is renowned as one of the best schools, which
is excellent in every aspect, including the methods of
teaching, well equipped surroundings, school discipline,
etc.. Besides, my great concern is that English teaching
is the way adapted by your school, that I am hoping
eagerly to be one of your students because I desire to
have great promotion in English. Apart from your focus
on students' academic performances, another thing which
attracts me is your strong encouragement for the students'
after school activities.
2008-03-28 23:40:09 補充:
Also, you can write as follows:
...........another thing which attracts me is your strong encouragement for the after
school activities on students.
參考: I hope my answer is helpful.