急！！！persuasive writing.唔識作.150words,!20 點

Swag

2008-03-28 10:36 pm

Many children in the remote areas in the mainland do not have the chance to go to school.many of them can hardly read.they are left without formal education.without education,it's really hard for them to find decent or well-paid jobs when they grow up.it is likely that they will remain poor for the rest of their lives.anorganization,save our kids,is enough for one of those poor children in mainland to go to elementary schools.the 100 hk dollars will be used to pay for the school fees,textbooks and learning materials!

please help me!please!help me作!please!just one time=[
The worksheet say:
writing in 150 words to persuade students for our school to sponsor one of those poor children.

!.title
2.stating your position
3.calling for actions
4.conculusion
Please help me!I don't know!

回答 (1)

TikYee

2008-03-28 11:01 pm

✔ 最佳答案

The rest of the life
Have you ever thought about what your life would be if you could not go to school? What can you do if you don’t have any education in your life? How can you support yourself in the rest of your life? There are many children in mainland China don’t have a chance to go to school. It isn’t because they don’t want to go to school, it is because they don’t have money to go to school. The education system is very poor in there. If any of us give one hundred dollars for our organization, you can change their lives. You can imagine how lovely their smiles are when they can go to school and learn what they want to learn for a long time ago. We both know our lives need education to support. Now, when we can support ourselves, please help those children to fulfill their dreams and help them to get a better life. They all need you help!

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