請唔好改句子既意見,只係雖指正小弟既文法錯誤就ok架喇^_^唔該晒
同埋講一講我寫錯文法個d句子有咩錯,冇錯個d唔洗改,thx
1.I own a gun in my house secretly.
2.Russia possesses the largest territory over all countrys.
3.Mary possesses the knowledge of biology widely.
4.I owned a car last year,but I sold it already.
5.Riding bike is a prevalent outdoor activity.
6.Prevalent culture is one part of youngster.
7.One of the feature of Hong Kong educational system is keeping recite.
8.Hong Kong is a place which has combined chinese and western feature.
9.Disneyland features princess as a tool to attract tourists.
10."Do you know who is the executive of this company?"Kitty asked."Yes,I do know,but I don't wanna tell you who is.
11.The duty of an executive is managing a company well.
12.Mr degree is an executive of ABC corporation,right?
13.HK government shuns to respond to the offers about suggesting of saving the envoirment.
14.The government suppresses the media to report news.
15.I relinquish to achieve my dream because I haven't the ability to do it.
16.The influence of HK has lessend.The government should takes the plunge and shuns this situation.
17.The expense exceeds our expectation.
18.SARS cropped up in 2003.After we underwent this horrible event,the government had enhanced the protection of the bacterium.
19.Taiwan denies of mongolian independence up to now.
20.Everyone know smoking will be addicted easily,but there are many idiots tries to smoke every year.
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2008-03-28 7:51 am
回答 (2)
2008-03-28 12:50 pm
✔ 最佳答案
2.Russia possesses the largest territory over all countries.3.Mary has a wide range of knowledge in biology.
4.I owned a car last year,but I have already sold it.
6.Prevalent culture is one part of the youngster.
7.One feature of the Hong Kong educational system is recitation.
9.Disneyland features princess as a tool to attract tourist.
10 "Do you know who is the executive of this company?" Kitty asked."Yes,I know, but I don't wanna tell you"
11.The duty of an executive is to manage a company well.
13.HK government shuns to respond to the offers about the suggestion of saving the envoirment.
15.I relinquish to achieve my dream because I haven't got the ability to do it.
16.The influence of HK has lessened.The government should take the plunge and shun this situation.
20. Everyone knows that smoking is addictive, but there are many idiots try to smoke every year.
I did my best to correct your sentences, however, based on my fluency of English, I can reassure you that most of your English sentence does not sound natural at all.
Grammatically, they sound OKAY... But, they don't sound like natural English that native English speaking will use.
(Just for your information, I grow up in New Zealand!)
Anyway, I did my best... Hope it helps and all the best! :)
2008-03-28 8:34 am
The possible corrections to your questions are listed as follows:
4.I owned a car last year,but I have sold it already.
6.Prevalent culture is one part of youngsters /a youngster.
7.One of the feature of Hong Kong's educational system is keeping to recite.
8.Hong Kong is a place which has combined Chinese and Western features.
11.The duty of an executive is to manage a company well.
13.HK government shuns to respond to the suggestions of saving the envoirment.
16.The influence of HK has lessened.The government should take the plunge and shuns this situation.
17.The expenses has exceeded our expectations.
20.Everyone knows smoking will be addicted easily, but there are many idiots who try to smoke every year.
The other sentences are alright which may not need corrections.
You question is too long! I don't have much time to explain!Please split them into 2 or 3 question in the yahoo knowledge!
4.I owned a car last year,but I have sold it already.
6.Prevalent culture is one part of youngsters /a youngster.
7.One of the feature of Hong Kong's educational system is keeping to recite.
8.Hong Kong is a place which has combined Chinese and Western features.
11.The duty of an executive is to manage a company well.
13.HK government shuns to respond to the suggestions of saving the envoirment.
16.The influence of HK has lessened.The government should take the plunge and shuns this situation.
17.The expenses has exceeded our expectations.
20.Everyone knows smoking will be addicted easily, but there are many idiots who try to smoke every year.
The other sentences are alright which may not need corrections.
You question is too long! I don't have much time to explain!Please split them into 2 or 3 question in the yahoo knowledge!
參考: my own writing
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