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2008-03-28 12:08 am
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My name is Cecilia Lee . I am eleven years old . I live in Tin Shui Wai . I live with my parents and brother . I study in Tin Shui Wai Catholic Primary School . Cantonese is my mother tongue . I can also speak in Putonghua and English as well . My favorite subject is music . It is because I like playing piano . I play piano for six years . My hobby is play badminton . It can make me strange and I want to have a healthy life start . I always play badminton with my family . We play badminton twice a week . We play badminton in the park . I enjoy play badminton very much .
(P.S : 係自我介紹)

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2008-03-28 12:57 am
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My name is Cecilia Lee . I am eleven years old . I live in Tin Shui Wai . I live with my parents and brother . I study in Tin Shui Wai Catholic Primary School . My mother tongue is Cantonese . I can also speak in Putonghua and English as well . My favorite subject is music . It is because I like playing piano . I have played piano for six years . My hobby is playing badminton . It can make me strong and I want to have a healthy body. I always play badminton with my family in the park . We play badminton twice a week . I enjoy playing badminton very much .
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2008-03-27 17:01:41 補充:
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That is the end of my presentation. Thank you.
2008-03-28 12:32 am
I live with my parents and brother.呢度唔洗要and brother,my parents 已經包括左.
仲有 enjoy 後面v.要加ing
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