幫幫手，看下呢騙cause and effect的英文作文有沒有錯，thx
Greenhouse Effect
Today, humans have to face a big problem, the greenhouse effect.
When you drive your car like everyday you do, the carbon dioxide that releases from your
car and the industrial factory will join to another chemicals and be added to the atmosphere. It
will make the concentration of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere become greater and greater.
Then it would block the heat that is supposed to release from the earth through the atmosphere.
The heat that stay in the earth can increase temperature in the earth, through this way, the glaciers
in the North Pole and the South Pole will be melted gradually. There are 97.8% water in the earth
come from the glaciers.Everybody can try to imagine it, when the glaciers melt become water, can
humans still live in a world that is full of water? No!
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2008-03-27 1:16 pm
回答 (3)
2008-03-31 1:53 pm
Today, humans are facing a big problem, the greenhouse effect.
The carbon dioxide that releases from cars and industrial factories will be joined with other chemicals and be added to the concentration of the carbon dioxide in the atmophere, which would trap some of the heat released from earth.
The heat that could not escape to the outer space increases the temperature on earth, which, as a result gradually melts the glaciers in the North Pole and the South Pole.
I could not figure out what you are trying to say in the last two sentences so I didn't try to correct them.
The carbon dioxide that releases from cars and industrial factories will be joined with other chemicals and be added to the concentration of the carbon dioxide in the atmophere, which would trap some of the heat released from earth.
The heat that could not escape to the outer space increases the temperature on earth, which, as a result gradually melts the glaciers in the North Pole and the South Pole.
I could not figure out what you are trying to say in the last two sentences so I didn't try to correct them.
2008-03-27 5:05 pm
It seems to me, you are talking about Global Warming rather than Greenhouse Effect.
Greenhouse effect is a process is not a problem!
not bad really. but the contexts are mixed together, you should have separate them into 2 sections - 1) Cause 2) Effect
Greenhouse effect is a process is not a problem!
not bad really. but the contexts are mixed together, you should have separate them into 2 sections - 1) Cause 2) Effect
2008-03-27 1:30 pm
When you drive your car like everyday you do, the carbon dioxide that releases from your
要改When you drive your automobile, like you issued every day carbon dioxide
It will make the concentration of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere become greater and greater.
要改It more and more will become the carbon dioxide in the atmospheric centralism.
The heat that stay in the earth can increase temperature in the earth
要改In Earth's hot pause in Earth
There are 97.8% water in the earth
要改Has 97.8% water in the Earth to come from the glacier
要改When you drive your automobile, like you issued every day carbon dioxide
It will make the concentration of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere become greater and greater.
要改It more and more will become the carbon dioxide in the atmospheric centralism.
The heat that stay in the earth can increase temperature in the earth
要改In Earth's hot pause in Earth
There are 97.8% water in the earth
要改Has 97.8% water in the Earth to come from the glacier
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