One hot summer day, Mr and Mrs Lee took their children to the beach .
They went by bus and carried their baskete with them. They got there at
noon. First they found a good place to put their things. Then Mr Lee and the
children ran into the sea.
Mrs Lee could not swim so she spent her time watching the boats and the
seabirds.
They went home before dark. They all had a good time.
5該幫我睇下我有冇做錯,thx...^^
[急!!!]5該救我!!!5年級Tense!!!^^
2008-03-27 7:23 am
回答 (5)
2008-03-27 8:23 am
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[急!!!]5該救我!!!5年級Tense!!!^^~比啲信心自己, 沒有錯啊!
2008-03-27 8:19 am
Although you did not write the paragraph, you did a very good job in filling in the "tense". Keep up the good work!!
By the way, don't mind the answers from BT. The paragraph is meant to be for the 5th grader for God sake. And one can definitely "run into" the sea if one wants to do so.
By the way, don't mind the answers from BT. The paragraph is meant to be for the 5th grader for God sake. And one can definitely "run into" the sea if one wants to do so.
參考: IMHO
2008-03-27 7:33 am
do not listen to the guy beofore, u spell basket wrong there are no extra e at the end !!!!!!!
參考: me
2008-03-27 7:31 am
首先hot可以刪去,
went by bus應改took bus,跟住刪去with them.
跟住got there改arrived.
之後應改做found a good place to have a seat.
同埋唔係the children係his,
唔會ran into,最多都係along.
mrs lee唔識swim應該用cannot而唔係could not
最尾唔好用before dark,用at the evening,同埋had a nice day會好d~
2008-03-26 23:35:29 補充：
我既程度高你好多,你可能唔明,
但盡量改到你最適合既程度la~
其實你段野好唔英文,不過唔知宜家小學生既英文水平,你大個會進步好多架la,加油!
went by bus應改took bus,跟住刪去with them.
跟住got there改arrived.
之後應改做found a good place to have a seat.
同埋唔係the children係his,
唔會ran into,最多都係along.
mrs lee唔識swim應該用cannot而唔係could not
最尾唔好用before dark,用at the evening,同埋had a nice day會好d~
2008-03-26 23:35:29 補充：
我既程度高你好多,你可能唔明,
但盡量改到你最適合既程度la~
其實你段野好唔英文,不過唔知宜家小學生既英文水平,你大個會進步好多架la,加油!
2008-03-27 7:27 am
沒有錯呢!
很利害呢!你是讀英文學校的嗎?
我五年級的時候英文才攞b而已...
很利害呢!你是讀英文學校的嗎?
我五年級的時候英文才攞b而已...
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