英文信!!!唔識點寫?!!(急)

2008-03-27 2:02 am

我有兩個外國朋友(佢地係大人...我係小朋友)
之前黎左HK探我..我寫左封信俾佢地..唔該幫我
睇下d文法岩唔岩!?有冇咩大問題?幫我改一改?
唔該..

Dear Reza and Nirvair ,
Hello! I'm Lily. Do you remember me? How are you?
I have lots of homeworks to do. So I have not times to send a letter of
you. I am sorry. My teachers like crazy. I miss you so much. I hope I can see you once more time. I had a great experience last time. I have never talk to foreigner over an hour. I was rather happy. I just finish a Easter holiday. I have
seven days of my hoilday. I was go shoppong with my cousin. We were go
to Harbor City. I also bought my favorite magazine. It is 'Seventeen
magazine'. Did you seen that before? I love that magazine. What is your
interest? I like watching TV. Did your never seen 'Supernatural' and
'American's next top model'? These are perfect TV program. I already bought its DVD. But I think it is a little bit expensive. Hong Kong's weather is pretty good. What time you will come here again? Tell me more about you. Ha ha..I hope to receive your letter.
Yours,
Lily
(佢地係夫妻,我可以係邊到同埋加d咩祝福語呀?
洗唔洗寫日期?如果我要寫信封..佢地既地址係唔係
寫係信封面?咁如果我想寫埋回郵地址呢?咁要寫係邊?
同埋我想同佢地講我換左new英文名..叫Lilith..咁我應該
係邊到寫?同埋點寫?)

唔該唔該...!!!

回答 (1)

一家之煮

2008-03-27 4:03 am

✔ 最佳答案

Dear Reza and Nirvair ,
Hello! I'm Lily. Do you remember me? How are you? I have lots of homework because my teachers are crazy, so I don't have a lot of time to send a letter to you- sorry about that. I miss you so much, I hope I can see you again. I was very happy and had a great experience last time- I had never talked to a native English speaker for over an hour before. I just finished seven days of Easter holiday. I went shopping with my cousin, went to Harbor City, and I also bought my favorite magazine, 'Seventeen'. Have you seen that before? I love that magazine. What are your interests? I like watching TV. Have you ever seen 'Supernatural' and 'America's Next Top Model'? These are great TV programs. I already bought the DVDs, but I think it is a little bit expensive. Hong Kong's weather is pretty good. When will you come here again? Tell me more about you. I hope to receive your letter.
Yours,
Lily

(佢地係夫妻,我可以係邊到同埋加d咩祝福語呀? You don't have to.
洗唔洗寫日期? If this is not a formal letter, then you don't have to.如果我要寫信封..佢地既地址係唔係寫係信封面? Yes, of course.咁如果我想寫埋回郵地址呢?咁要寫係邊? It's a polite way to put your address on the upper left hand corner
同埋我想同佢地講我換左new英文名..叫Lilith..咁我應該
係邊到寫?同埋點寫?) I changed my name to Lilith.

參考: I am a native English speaker

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