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At first, we were thinking to do a survey about hobbies, but then because the topic was very gerneral, so we decided to talk about the tourism in TST area. We would like to know more about the feelings of tourist.

Before starting the interview, we had drafted 10 questions for the product & service, environment and museums etc. On March 18th, my partner, i and other form 2 student took a camera to TST for the survey. My partner and I were so tired after asking tourists under the hot shinning sun. We asked over than 10 tourists while and took a lot of photos with them. They were so nice! When we finished our survey, the weather became so cool and cloudy.

After that, we found out most tourists were coming from England and Australia. Lots of them liked to visit Hong Kong Park. Two tourists said that Hong Kong pollution was a problem. Over half of tourists thought that Hong Kong architechture were special and they were enjoy the trip in TST……

Tourists thought that the seafood was very good, this may cause the seafood in Hong Kong was pretty cheap and delicious(呢句其實唔明你想講咩...) Most tourists felt Hong Kong buildings were spectacular because Hong Kong has many hight-rise talk building and more crowded than their country. in conclusion, tourists loved the environment in TST and they thought the goods were not expensive and they felf happy travelling at TST also. It is a good tourism place in Hong Kong. We think the environment in TST is good however the product are more expensive than Tuen Mum.

My partner and I were very nervous before we started our survey. All of tourists were nice. They were very helpful to finish those questionair and took photos with us. This survey encouraged us to try to speak english to other people. We both thought this experience was good for us.

2008-03-26 17:30:21 補充：
第1段第2行: gerneral 應該係 GENERAL 先岩
第4段第3行:high-rise talk 應該係 TALL先岩

At the beginning, we wanted to do a survey about hobbies, but this topic was too extensive, so we changed it to tourist about TST. We wanted to ask the tourists about their feelings towards the TST.

Before the survey, we wrote out 10 questions about the goods, environment and museums in TST for preparation. On March 18th, my partner and I brought a camera and went to TST with some Form 2 students. The sun was shining quite brightly at noon, my partner and I were so tired after asking the tourists. We asked more than 10 tourists and we took a lot of photos with them. They were so nice! When we finished our survey, the weather became cool and cloudy.

After the survey, we discovered that most of tourists came from England and Australia. A number of tourists like visiting the Hong Kong Park. Two tourists said that Hong Kong pollution was a problem. Over half of the tourists thought that the Hong Kong architecture was very special and felt happy during the trip in TST……

Tourists thought that the seafood was so good since the seafood in Hong Kong is quite cheap and delicious. Lots of tourists thought that Hong Kong architecture is so special that may because the buildings in Hong Kong are taller and more crowded than that in their countries. In conclusion, lots of tourists like the environment in TST and they thought that the goods in TST are not expensive. They felt happy when travelling in TST , so TST is a good tourist spot in Hong Kong. We think that although the environment in TST is good, the goods in TST are more expensive than that in Tuen Mum.

My partner and I were very nervous before we started doing our survey. All the tourists were nice. They helped us finish all of the question papers and took photos with us. We were encouraged to speak English with other people while conducting the survey. We both thought that this excursion was doing us good.