出差預約時間~~英文翻譯

We are planning to meet with you in your office/company at 9:30 on May 10th.
By the way, I have checked the map and your company seems near the airport, doesn't it?
Would you please provide the map to your company?
事實上，我們應該不會這麼的寫商用e-mail!
建議你改為：
We are looking forward to visiting you at 9:30 on May 10th, 2008. (on 5/10/2008)
Would you please provide the map to your company?
但如果你是預約時間，
建議你改為更婉轉的及正式方式：
I would like to make an appointment with you, but I am not sure if you are available at 9:30 on May 10th, 2008.
If you have a tight schedule, please let me know in advance.
(當然你可以用其它的方式表達．．．）
By the way, where is your company?
Would you please provide the map?

We plan to meet you at your company at 9:30 am on May 9th. I read the map, and found your company was near by an airport. Is it correct? Or, could you please provide me the map to your company?

2008-03-26 12:09:41 補充：
it's on may10th...sorry...>0

we'd going to see you at company in AM9:30 May 10 and we check out your company it seem by airport,isn't is? or could you offer your company local site with map ?




PS:AM9:30
用念的話是~
nine tirty o'clock

2008-03-26 13:51:32 補充：
May we exchange our appointment at pm 3:00 May 2,if you could ?