1分鍾短講 - 復活節做過d咩 {搵人幫我改改}

During the Easter holiday,I watched Television, played computer games, went shopping with my mother, and watched a movie at a cinema with my primary school mates. Of course i did my homework during the holiday. I had fun during the holiday and i look forward to the next holiday.

2008-03-25 23:58:46 補充：
用 during 因為係講復活節做過d咩

唔用 ing form 因為已經發生咗 (went shopping除外--因為係過去進行式 )

其望可用looking forward

希望幫到你

During the Easter holiday , I was watching TV , playing computer games , shopping with my mother and watched a movie with my primary schoolmate. And then I did my homework in the holiday . I think this holiday was full of fun and am expecting the next holiday .

During the Easter holiday, I watched TV and played computer games at home. Also, I went out shopping with my mother and went for a movie with my ex-schoolmate. Afterall, I had finished all my homework within the holiday.
The holiday is full of fun and I am expecting the next one.

During the Easter holiday, i watched TV at home, and played computer games and went shopping with mom. After that, i watched a movie with my old school classmates.
Then,i did my homework in the holiday.
The Easter holiday this year, was fun and excited.
I'm looking forward to the next Easter holiday.

你冇講改D咩……
所以我唔敢改你D內容，改左D錯野就算。
In my Easter holiday , I had watched TV , played computer games , gong shoping with my mother and I had also watched a movie with my primary school classmates .And then I had done my homework. I think the holiday is very fun and I expect the next holiday .

2008-03-26 00:11:47 補充：
Good morning/afternoon everybody,today I have to talk about my Easter holiday.

In these day,I had watched TV, played computer games at home.I had played a lot of new games!It is very intereting and exciting!

2008-03-26 00:12:22 補充：
I also went shopping with my mum,We both bought a lot of things and both of us were very contented.I had seen a flim with my primary schoolmates too.I had not seen them for a long time!We all missed other very much and we were happy.

2008-03-26 00:12:28 補充：
Certainly,I had done all my homework in the hoilday ,too.
The Easter holiday is very wonderful and I just had lots of fun in it.I expect the next holiday

2008-03-26 00:19:00 補充：
In these days <-我打漏左個s