(英文工課)A journey in Hong Kong(20點)

I went to Hong Kong with my family for a trip.
The first day, we went to Lantau Island and saw the Giant Buddha. The Buddha was so big! The second day, we went to the Hong Kong Disneyland. We rode on the roller coaster named Space Mountain, watched the 4-D movie, took photos with lots of cartoon characters, etc. It was great fun. The third day, we went to the peak. The view was really pretty. We stayed there until sun set. We took lots of photos there. The forth day, we ate our breakfast at the hotel and set off to the airport.
We really wanted to stay longer in Hong Kong! We had a happy trip there and we want to visit Hong Kong again.

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2008-03-27 11:49:13 補充：
I was very happy, because I want to Hong Kong different places.
First day, I want toTian Tan Buddha.The Buddha is 34 meters high, weighs 250 tonnes, and was the world tallest outdoor bronze seated Buddha prior to 2007! It also can even be seen as far away as Macau on a clear day. Visitors have to climb 268 steps !I am extremery tired. Hopefuly my parent are tired too and rest a while.If not, I have to walk with them without rest!
Then next day, I want to disney.There have fore lands,Fantasy land,tomorrow land, and andventre land.I like the show called "The Golden Mickey"there have many shows in there.I like the one is talk about sea.And there is has a game called "Space Montain".It is too excited that I felt dizzy at that moment.
The third day I visit The Peak,The Peak is on the montain, it looks beautiful if you see Hong Kong at there.Then you know why Hong Kong is a "easten jumbo",you need a tram to go there, the tram to go there,I felt very annoying! The tram is at slow as the turtle!But is good to see Hong Kongn beatiful place.
The last day, I am very happy about this trip, I feel extremely(means very) excited, I brought a postcard in The Peak and sent to my friends.

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