write one composition

1)A day in ocean park

The 1 Q:
A visit to ocean park first composition:
We woke up early in the morning .Mum,dad,Jonathan andI set off for ocean park after breakfast.We went by bus.We arrived at half past ten in the morning.
Ocean park Hk is one of the most favourite tourist attraction in Hong Kong . The different parts of the park are connected by a cable car system as well as the world's second largest outdoor escalator.
The theme park currently has 14 exciting and thrilling rides and spectaular aquariums displaying sharks,jelly fish and more than 2000 fishes of 250 species.Other attractions such as the Kids'world , the ocean theatre,the bird paradise and the giant panda exhidit are also welcomed by visitor of all ages.
Dad and I like exciting games.We went to have a roller - coaster ride on the Dragon.Mum and Jonathan went to play some skill games.They won three prizes.Jonthan was very pleased with his rewards.Then we went to the ocean theatre but we could not watch the dolphin show because it was full.We took a ride on the Ferris Wheel instead.This was the only game we played together.After that, we took the cable car and went to the Kid's world because Jonathan wanted to enjoy the rides there.
In the evening , we had dinner at a chinese restaurant.Jonathan even slept on the bus when we were returning home.What a tiring day!

John wrote a litter to you .He will come to visit HK with his mum and dad in march.Write a letter to john, telling himthat you will arrange a one-day tour for him in ocean park.Writw in about 80 words.




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~Beginning - recipient's name.
~Paragraph 1:Beginning paragraph
~Paragraph 2:Main body How will you arrange the visit to ocean park?
~ending paragraph
~Sender's name
~The simple future tense is used in the plan of events.
~For factual descriptions about ocean park,the simple present tense is used.