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Today was a hot sunny day .Everyone couldn't go to school or work .My cousin Mary who came from Australia badly want to visit Hong Kong .So,I invited her went to visit Ocean Park to watch some animals' performance .After we had breakfast ,we started to go Ocean Park by bus .When we got off the bus , we saw long queues for tickets ,at that time it was very crowded .
When we got into Ocean Park .We were very excited and happy because we had a long merry time to visit in Ocean Park .First,we went on a roller coaster .It was the most exciting game in Ocean Park .Although we were felt frightened ,we were also felt impressive and interesting.
Then we went to the Animals' Theatre to watch a show about some animals' performance .I thought the bear could balance on the top of the the round ball is the most interesting thing in this show, it was make many viewers felt very surprised.
The show finished at one o'clock in the afternoon .We both felt hungry .So we went to have lunch in Mcdonald .But the food were more expensive than other restaurants.
After we had lunch, we went to watch animals parade in the street of Ocean Park .There were many animals to performance tricks for us .It was amazing to see the bear balanced two balls on the top of it's nose.
When we visited all of things in Ocean Park .We went home by bus at eight o'clock in the evening .We both felt tired, therefore we slept very deeply in the bus until we arrive our home.