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2008-03-21 9:05 pm
1.Since I was a young child, I have liked drawing and designing.

2.Now I am also very interested in fashion design and hope to become a fashion designer when I am older.

3.Whenever I have free time, I always like to read fashion magazines or watch fashion TV program, such as Project Runway.

4.Although it is difficult for me to achieve it, I believe that if I try my best, my dream will one day come true.

5.Everyone should have a dream,dream can be a good power to encourage you.
這句話是想說夢想會推動人不斷努力進步,但不知怎寫

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2008-03-21 9:39 pm
1. I like drawing and designing since I was a child.
2. Now I am also very interested in fashion design and hope to become a
fashion designer in the future.
3. Whenever I have free time, I like to read fashion magazines or watch
fashion TV program,such as Project Runway.
4. Although it is difficult for me to achieve it, if I try my best, my dream will one day come true.
5. Everyone should have a dream to encourage oneself.
2008-03-21 9:12 pm
1.Since I was a young child,I liked drawing and designing.
2Now I am very interested in fashion design and hope to become a fashion designer when I am older
3.When I have free time, I always like to read fashion magazines or watch fashion TV program, such as Project Runway.
4.Although it is difficult for me to achieve it, I believe that if I try my best, my dream will come true one day .
5.Everyone should have a dream,dream can be a power that encourage you.


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