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Topic: Agree the Earth is being damaged by human activity.
In recent years, the climate have been warmer and most animals have been endangered, elephans and rhinos etc. Because of above reasons,i believe the earth is being damaged by human. I focus on driving and overyhunting.
First, private cars are convenient transportation for the human because human can drive to go to everywhere in short time. However, humans never think about the environment on the earth.Otherwise,cars exhaust harmful gases while driving because driving discharge carbon monxide, hydrocabons and nitrigen oxide. As a result, polluting gases pump the atmosphere which affect greenhouse effect.
Second, hunting has increased of killing the endangered woildlife because of the money. Woildlife has a high cost of selling.During the past twenty five years, farmers chase off or kill elephants that raid their crops. Even though hunting is illegal, which still persists. If we ignore this problem for a long time, we can be not able to see an elephant or any valuable animals in the future.
In the conclusion,we know human actvity has been making enough trouble on the earth. Consequently, we should really consider the earth. We can't give the chance to destory the earth. Everyone hopes the environment which not be changed dramatically.
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2008-03-20 12:56 am
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2008-03-20 9:52 pm
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In recent years, the climate have been warmer and most animals have been endangered, elephants and rhinos etc. Because of above reasons, I believe the earth is being damaged by human. I focus on driving and over hunting.First, private cars are convenient transportation for the human because human can drive to go to everywhere in short time. However, humans never think about the environment on the earth. Otherwise, cars exhaust harmful gases while driving because driving discharge carbon monoxide, hydrocarbons and nitrogen oxide. As a result, polluting gases pump the atmosphere which affects greenhouse effect.
Second, hunting has increased of killing the endangered wildlife because of the money. Wildlife has a high cost of selling. During the past twenty five years, farmers chase off or kill elephants that raid their crops. Even though hunting is illegal, which still persists? If we ignore this problem for a long time, we can be not able to see an elephant or any valuable animals in the future.
In the conclusion, we know human activity has been making enough trouble on the earth. Consequently, we should really consider the earth. We can't give the chance to destroy the earth. Everyone hopes the environment which not be changed dramatically.
2008-03-20 4:09 am
In recent years, the climate becomes warmer and most of the animals become endangered, such as elephants, rhinos etc. Because of the above reasons, I believe that the earth is being damaged by human activities, especially driving vehicles and massacre of animals..
First, although cars are convenient to people because they can drive to everywhere, they never think about the damage of the environment on earth. Cars discharge harmful gases during driving, such as carbon monoxide, hydrocarbons and nitrogen oxide. As a result, polluted gases will be pumped to the atmosphere with greenhouse effect as the result.
Second, people hunt for earning money by selling the animals with a high price. This increases the death of endangered wildlife. Even though hunting is illegal, It happens everyday. If we ignore this problem, we will not able to see an elephant or any precious animals in the future.
In the conclusion, human activities are causing damage to the earth. We should treat this problem seriously. We can't destroy our earth anymore. Everyone has the responsibility to keep our lovely earth beautiful.
First, although cars are convenient to people because they can drive to everywhere, they never think about the damage of the environment on earth. Cars discharge harmful gases during driving, such as carbon monoxide, hydrocarbons and nitrogen oxide. As a result, polluted gases will be pumped to the atmosphere with greenhouse effect as the result.
Second, people hunt for earning money by selling the animals with a high price. This increases the death of endangered wildlife. Even though hunting is illegal, It happens everyday. If we ignore this problem, we will not able to see an elephant or any precious animals in the future.
In the conclusion, human activities are causing damage to the earth. We should treat this problem seriously. We can't destroy our earth anymore. Everyone has the responsibility to keep our lovely earth beautiful.
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