翻譯做英文~唔可以copy網上的

我自己翻譯：

原版：
Then, I saw a big monster and fought with it. I won! When I came
back home, my mother gave me five thousand dollars.

我認為更改，之後的版本：
Then, I saw a big monster and fought with it. One hour of fighting, I
won! When I came back home, I said to my mother that of the event.
She felt great of me and gave me five thousand.

With was occupied by me to meet big moster on to make war I after it
to win went home mother to reward my 5,000 Yuan

After that, I met a big monster and fight with it. I won. Mum gave me five thousand dollars as a reward when I returned home.

I encountered a gigantic monster on my way home. I fought with it fiercely. And of course, I won! My mom was so proud of me, and gave me $5000 as reward.

Then, I saw a big monster and fought with it. I won! When I came
back home, my mother gave me five thousand dollars.
又可能係
Then, I saw a big monster and fought with it. One hour of fighting, I
won! When I came back home, I said to my mother that of the event.
She felt great of me and gave me five thousand.

跟住 我就遇到一個大怪獸 就跟它開戰 我勝了 回家後媽媽獎我五千元 = Then I met a big monster and fight with it. I won! When I went home, my mother gave me 5000 dollers.

Then I came across a big monster and I fought with it. Finally I won. Mother
gave me five thousand dollars as reward when I returned home.

After that, I met a huge monster, and I fought with it. Finally I won. My mom awarded me $5000 as I got home

Then I met a big monster and fight with it. I won! When I went home, my mother gave me 5000 dollers.