句子通順嗎?文法對嗎?

2008-03-17 11:27 pm
The xxx service will be terminated as its utilization rates
were too low over the past year.

回答 (2)

2008-03-18 9:07 pm
✔ 最佳答案
The xxx service will be terminated as its utilization rates
were too low over the past year.
大至上沒什不對, 如勉強要改:
The xxx service will soon be terminated since its utilization rate were too low last year(往年) (or, over the passed years 多年來)
參考: Self
2008-03-17 11:39 pm
its轉為the會好一點,over轉為in也可以(我認為不轉over也好)。
參考: 自己


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