英文問題 (about dating)

I think teenagers are too young to start dating. It is because I found that dating may affect studying. Most of the teenagers start dating when they were in secondary school. If they start dating too young, it will be more affective.
I think more and more teenagers start dating nowadays is because there are too many TV programmes included dating. It makes teenagers interested in it and they want to try on the daily.
I would like to give some advice to the teenagers who want to start dating. Studying is important. You have the freedom to date but it's no need to start too early. If you really want to start dating, remember to spend more time on studying.

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In my opinion,
I dont think the teenagers were suitable to have dating because
they can not concentrate to their learning
and a lot of teenagers just think that is a game,
it will be affect to their future so that why I would not agree with
the teenagers to start dating too early,
I would like to advice them that knowledge is importent than everything,
no knowledge no future.

hope this help！

2008-03-16 10:08:38 補充：
amend : importance