急需一篇[遊學團來港　介紹他們去一個香港的好地方!]的英文文章

Good morning/afternoon everybody, today I would like to introduce a place for
them (遊學團)to visit.
I think that Ocean Park is a good place for them. First, I think that there are many games for then to play. As I think that they are so tired to study, so I think that they should avulse some times to relax themselves.

Second, besides playing games, they can also learn new things in the park.
Since, they can visit the animals in Ocean Park. For example, there are pandas, dolphins and others kinds of animals. Moreover, there are also different kinds of plants, so they can know more about them.

Finally, they can also go shopping in Ocean Park. There are many kinds of souvenirs in the park. So that they can buy some and bring back to that country.
As these three reasons, I think that Ocean Park is really a good place for them to visit.
That’s all of my presentation, thank you.

哩篇野係我自己作架,可能唔係作得幾好同埋我唔知你present幾耐
我今次作得簡短d,因我唔知你係幾年班ge present
希望唔好見怪

2008-03-16 13:27:31 補充：
有一個岩岩見到錯左,改返先
'So that they can buy some and bring back to that country.'
應轉為
So that they can buy some and bring back to there country.'

唔知仲會唔會有錯,你自己留意下啦-_-

2008-03-16 13:31:03 補充：
'So that they can buy some and bring back to their country.'