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2008-03-14 5:10 am

I do not go to school because today is my school's staff development day.

I think that may i have a wonderful vacation.

It seems perfect! But unfortunately, it is not really nice for me.

The education department announce that every primary school students stop to study at the school until two weeks afterward.

So my little brother does not go to school. He is so delighted about this policy and appreciates the disease.

I am so angry his thinking because it is immoral and unreasonable concept.

But I will forgive his as he is a still a child.

He needs to care other people situation, especially for patient and their family.

I think that i should some responsibility for teaching my brother right things.

Although I lose enjoyable vacation it is valuable for me and my brother.

It offers opportunity for everyone to lean how to face unexpected accident.

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2008-03-14 5:46 am

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1. I do not go to school because today is my school staff development day.

2. I think that I may have a wonderful vacation.

3. It seems perfect! But unfortunately, it is not really nice for me.

4.The education department announced that every primary school student should stop studying at the school until two weeks afterward.

5.So my little brother does not go to school. He is so delighted about this policy and appreciates the disease.

6. I am so angry to his thinking because it is an adnormal and unreasonable concept.

7. But I will forgive him as he is still a child.

8. He needs to care other people's situation, especially for the patients and their families.

9. I think that I should have some responsibility for teaching my brother to get right ideas

10.Although I lose the enjoyable vacation, it is valuable for me and my brother.

11.It provides opportunity for everyone to learn how to face unexpected accident.

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