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I [am] very sorrowful today.
因為 today 所以用現在式。
My father [is unemployed] today.
除了因為 today 外還要將名詞改為形容詞 [unemployed] 才正確。
So my family [losts the] main financial resource.
因為 my family 係數唔到,所以 [lost] 要加 [s],另外還要加 [the] 在名詞 [main financial resource] 前面才正確。
I also had some problems, such as [loving] problem, [healthy] problem and so on.
因為 love, health 係名詞,所以要改為形容詞 loving, healthy 才正確。
If I [can] free to choose, I just want these troubles will get out of life.
因為後面個 want 係現在式,所以 could 要改為 can 才對。
But it is impossible, [because] reality is reality.
這句用 because 會比較通順。
But I believe that [the] adversity [will disappear] one day.
名詞前面要加 the, 另外 [will disappear] 同 [one day] 調轉會比較通順。
Never [giving] up is my character.
因為 give 係動詞,而一句不能有兩個動詞,所以要改為名詞的 [giving]。
Hope I can stick to my promise around the time and always think [it is] positive.
這句漏左代名詞 [it is],不然的話便不通順了。
2008-03-13 02:03:06 補充:
So my family lost [the] main financial resource.
Oh sorry... 唔記得 lost 係過去式... 那麼錯處就只有加 [the] 在名詞 [main financial resource] 前面了。
2008-03-13 12:05:05 補充:
If I could free to choose, I [would hope that] these troubles [was getting] out of life [from me].
這樣文法才對,句子又通順。