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2008-03-12 6:15 am
首先,各分行之外觀和室內裝修不夠一致、招牌的口號亦不一樣,有些分行仍然是十年前的裝修,感覺與時代脫節。現今之客人是有要求的,他們對分行的環境是注重的,講究的。要有時尚又舒適的環境下,客人才願意付出貴一點的利息支出。

其次,本公司在過往十年累積數萬個已清還之客戶,在分行人手不足的情況下,不能充份利用此資源作進一步推廣,白白浪費此商機 。本人提議聘請外間機構利用本公司之資料作商業之推廣,以致減少公司聘請資深之員工困難。

回答 (2)

2008-03-18 6:36 am
First of all, view and interior decoration incompletely unanimous, slogan of signboard also different outside the every branch, some branches remained the equipment ten years ago, felt divorced from era.Guests of now have the demand, they pay attention to the environment of the branch, exquisite.There should be fashions under comfortable again environments, guests like to pay a bit more expensive interest expense. Secondly, our company is accumulating several tens of thousands of customers that has already checked up and returned in passing ten years, in a situation that the branch is short of hands, can't fill the share and utilize this resource to make popularizing further, waste this business opportunity.I suggest engaging the organization of outer room to use materials of our company as the popularization of the commerce, so that it is difficult to reduce the company and engage reputable staff.
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2008-03-12 7:02 am
First of all,the outside appearance,the inside decoration and the slogan of each branches are inconsistency.Some of the branches's decoration were 10 years
design,which is old-fashioned. The customer of nowadays has the request,they are very consider and fastidious about the environment of the branches.
Customer are willing to pay more interests in a modern and comfortable environment.

Secondly,our company accumulates tens of thousands of the full-pay customer in past ten years.If our branches are out of staff, we cannot use this advantage to have a further promotion and wastes this opportunity.Therefore,I suggest to
invite other company using our information to have promotion,so that we can reduce the difficulties of recruiting the experienced staff.

2008-03-11 23:02:39 補充:
Some of the branches ' s decoration were 10 years
design,which is old-fashioned.


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