help me to correct....daily diary

2008-03-12 1:16 am
Today I am sick, so I cannot go to school.
My mother help me phone school to tell them know.
Then, my mother with I go to see a doctor.
Dr. Wong said that I get cold, needing to rest enough.
My mother was very worried my health.
I also afraid that my health because school exam will come soon.
Anyway, I am only to rest enough and eat a lot of fruit.
It can help me to regain my health quickly.
Thank you for my mother to look after me carefully and friends to visit me.
I promise all of you I will be better very soon

回答 (2)

2008-03-12 1:47 am
Today I am not feeling well and I could not go to school. My Mum makes a call to school to tell the school that I was sick. Later on the day, my Mum took me to a doctor, and the doctor name is Mr. Wong. Mr Wong said that I caught a cold and told me to take more rest. My Mum is getting worry on my health, but I felt more worrying on the exam coming soon. I know what I must do now is to rest and eat more fruit to make myself more health and regain my health quickly so that I can pickup and continue my studying again. I just cannot wait until my body become well again! I am delighted, especially to my friend who come to visit me and my mother giving her care on me. With all the care from everyone, I promise I will become much better soon enough.
2008-03-12 1:46 am
My mother informed Schoolteacher that I am absent today since I am illness, and I went out to see doctor with my mother.

Dr Wong told me that I am getting cold and need to take more rest. I learn that my mother worried my health so much. Meanwhile, I am worry myself also since the exam wills come soon so I took more rest and eat a lot of fruit that it can help me to regain my health quickly.

Thank you for my mother to look after me carefully and my friends to visit me. I promise all of you I will be better very soon.


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