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On Saturday, my friends had a appointment with me in EI.KIMO because we had to discuss how to do the report about economical. In the Macau Tower, there was a exhibition about DAVINCI, so we went to visit the exibition and bought some mementos. At that time, my mother called me and told me to go to the supermarket to bought fer some food. Although I felt very tired, I had to do it because my father and mother are working very hard with them jobs.After I had my dinner, my girl-friend and I went to the cinema because she wanted to saw the film,LONG RIVER SEVENTH. She thought that the main character was very handsome and cute. At about 11:30pm I went home with her.

On Sunday, I was sleeping when my friend called me. He was in the library,going on with the report about economical.We allotted our jobs and then we went home because I had to get prepare for the barbecue.My mother brought some food, for example, fish, sausages and meatballs.My father helped me to grill the meat. After my elder sister and I finished swimming, we went to see the golden sunset here.That was really spectacular!!!

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On Saturday, I had an appointment with my friends in EI.KIMO to discuss how to make a report on economics. Then we visited the Macau Tower to see an exhibition about DAVINCI and buy some souvenirs. At the same time, I received a call from my mother asking me to buy some foods in the supermarket. Although I felt very tired, I still helped my mother to do so because my parents had to work very hard at their jobs. After dinner, my girl friend and I went to the cinema to watch the film ”LONG RIVER SEVENTH”, as my girl friend liked the leading character, who she thought was very handsome and cute. About 11:30 pm, I accompanied her home.
On Sunday, I was sleeping when my friends called me to join them in the library. We continued to discuss about the report on economics. We had the jobs assigned between us and then went home respectively.
We decided to had a barbecue. My mother bought some food, including fish, sausages and meatball. Father helped us grill the meat. After swimming with my elder sister, we went to see the sunset.

I had a happy and wonderful weekend!

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「 My friends had an appointment with me in EI KIMO on Saturday because we have to discuss that how to do reports about economical issue. We visited an exhibition which was held at the Macau Tower about DAVINCI and bought some memento. At that time, my mother called me going to supermarket to buy some foods. Although I felt very tired, I have to do. It is because my father and mother are very work hard on their job. After my dinner, my girl friend and I went to the cinema because she wanted to see the film -- LONG RIVER SEVENTH. She thought the leading character is very handsome and cute. I accompanied with her to go back home at about 11:30pm.

On Sunday, I slept on my bed when my friends gave me a call. He want to go library in order to prepare report about economical issue with me. At last, we finished my job and went home.

I have to prepare for the barbecue arrangement. Some food boiled by my mother, for example ; fish, sausage, meatball ... and etc. My father helped me to grill meat. Afterwards, my elder sister and I went to swim and we saw the golden sunset here before leaving.

This weekend was a happy & beautiful day. 」


謝謝。

在星期六，我的朋友具在 EI.KIMO 的我的任命，因為我們必須討論如何確實報告大約節約。對以後在 Macau 塔關於 DAVINCI 有展品，這樣我們是去拜訪他們，為一些買到紀念物。那時，我的母親電話我較之她命令那去超級市場買一些食物。雖然我覺得很疲倦的，但是我必須做這事，因為我的父親和母親是
很跟他們一起努力工作工作。晚上在我的晚餐之後，我的女朋友和我去看電影，因為她希望那看見長河 7，她儘管主要人物是很好看和可愛的。大約下午 11.30 點我伴隨著她回家。