Please check gammar

Lily

2008-03-09 10:37 pm

In this report discuss the problem in housekeeping department and suggest some training method. Most of these trainings are on-the-job training with coach/trainer showing the steps and procedures to them and let them do it and practice until they get familiarized. Training is very important of the housekeeping department. If the training method can’t do well then the customer will not come the hotel again because the customer living in the hotel, they are care about the room cleaning and the room attendant service quality.
XX Hotel is the 3 stars hotel so they cannot be a 2 stars housekeeping service so have a good training course then the service quality will up-grade.

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用戶189462

2008-03-09 11:01 pm

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Frankly speak, this is a poor composition seems like parts of the whole article. I dont really know what are before and after so I check only grammer of your article:

This report discusses the problems in housekeeping department and suggests some training methods. Most of these trainings are on-the-job training with coach/trainer showing the steps and procedures to them and let them do it and practice until they get familiarized. Training is very important to the housekeeping department. If the training methods can’t work well then the customers will not come the hotel again. While the customer staying in the hotel, they care about the room cleaning and the room attendant service quality.
XX Hotel is a 3 stars’ hotel, they cannot be a 2 stars housekeeping service, thus a good training course will up-grade the service quality.

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