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Beyond doubt, writing weblogs has been become increasingly popular among youngsters and adults .Living in under immense pressure, sharing their daily life and obstacle they encounter in the weblogs is a good way to alleviate their stress.

Owing its convenient function, weblogs is often referred to as an ideal way to express their feelings and communicate with others. For instance, according never fail to update information, the shy people can seize this opportunity to exude their emotions and allow their family and friends to more understand him or her. Moreover from time to time, it is difficult for shy people to say thins like thank you or sorry because it may make them feel embarrassed or uncomfortable. It is much easier for them tp express their ideas in weblogs rather than the situation of face to face .Therefore, writing weblogs is a good way to hence our friendship .


I believe that you will feel blissful, when you receive a warm sentence from your friends, no matter how long the sentence is. it is , of course, ideal to receive a message. Furthermore, it is more blessed to give than to receive. We can also encourage our friends by warm sentences and show a positive attitude towards to life in the weblogs, when someone is in adverse circumstances .Through weblogs we can stick together, no matter how immense the adversity is .

Based on the above discussion, it is obvious that weblogs is an ideal way for adolescents and adults to express their feeling and encourage someone.