改正文章!!(eng)

My favorite sport is dancing. When I was thirteen years old, I started to learn dancing.
At that time, I thought dancing is both sport and art, we can create different motion to make the dance becoming more beautiful. I had the experience of competition, our team needed to create a brand new dance all by ourselves, it is like our first baptism of fire, but we can get over this. We got the second runner-up amongst competitors. We are proud of this.

My favorite hobbie is dancing. When I was thirteen years old, I started to learn dancing.
At that moment, I think that dancing is both sports and art. We can create some motion(can change to movement) to make the dance more beautiful. I had the experience of competition. My team needs to create a new dance by ourselves, it is our baptism of fire, but we could get over this experiment, and we get the third among of the winners of a contest or successful candidates. We are proud of this.