My ideal (job) is (working) as an elementary school teacher, because I hope (I
could be) a teacher by worthy example. (Moreover), I like (children) very
much, I (think each of them are lovely angels! )
Also, I (can raise) cultivates sessions of children up (and assist them to
become a contribute person in the society, receives the children to like.)If (I
runs into somer mischievous student), I (will try my very best) to educate him (to behave as a polite and clever student), simultaneously ,I can educate (my
own child, it's really joyful.)
I also like (listening my student's need and difficulties) because I like helping
(children), I will help him to solve the (problem), (no matter) his study or his
family.
Therefore, (I hope I can be) a teacher.
P.S I copied from
http://www1.worldlingo.com/zh_tw/ but I have proofreaded
the content before handing in.So there would be no grammatically mistakes.