BIG HELP !!!!!!!!!!!

2008-03-04 10:23 am
i need you guys to help me change this writting to chinese and tell me if i got anything wrong ...


There was a distence explosion, then complete silence. It was evident that the poachers were still in the area. The intelligent reports had showen the need for urgent action.The government was concerned that as a consequet of so much illegal hunting, some of the magnificent animals would soon become extinct.Other governments had offered assistance to stop the defiant of the ilegal poaching gangs.Some people said the poachers were simply ignorance about the consequence excuse! Whatever the reason,it was importance that the rangers continued their frequent patrols, collecting evidence to prosecite the poachers.

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2008-03-07 2:43 am
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Let me try.
遠處傳來了一聲爆炸聲,接著就是一片死寂。很明顯地那些偷獵者仍在附近一帶。情報顯示(我們)需採取緊急行動。政府憂慮太多違法捕殺將令一些華麗的動物絕種。其它政府亦伸出援手以竭止非法獵殺集團目無法紀之行為。有人指這些偷獵者只是不曉得他們的所作所為帶來的後果,但這只不過是個藉口而已。無論什麼原因,森林管理員繼續經常巡邏是非常重要,他們可蒐集證據以檢控偷獵者。
There are typos here and there and there are some grammatical mistakes too. The logic flow is a bit patchy. Anyhow, I think readers can follow most of your arguements.


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