please check the grammar

2008-03-03 11:50 pm
Dear Mr. ABC,


Very nice to know you and give me best regards for Mr.BCC of your friend.

My name is Ms.EDI and work in RARD INDUSTRIES COMPANY, I'm sorry to inform you that Mr. KLKL left our company last year. Welcom to HK and I'm looking forward to meet you . Do you mind I would like to invite you to come to our office when you stay in HK? There is a showroom in our HK office and so many of designs I think you will very interesting. Our working time is : 9-1 (am), 2-6 (pm). If you arrive HK and anything has been settle in, please call me in the working time. My office number is: 12345678.

Looking forward to meet you !

Best Regards,


Ms. EDI
for RARD INDUSTRIES COMPANY

回答 (2)

2008-03-04 12:12 am
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Wired!!

Is it a real formal letter???

It is my pleasure to meet you and please give my best regards to your friend, Mr. BCC.

My name is EDI and I am working for RARD INDUSTRIES COMPANY. I am regret to tell you that Mr. KLKL has left our company since last year.

Welcome to HK and I'm looking forward to see you. Do you mind if I inviting you to our office during your stay in HK? We have a showroom displaying a variety of designs that you may feel interested. Our operation hour is between 9-1 (am) and 2-6 (pm). If you arrive in HK and settle down, please call me during the office hour at 12345678.

Looking forward to meeting you!


Best Regards,

EDI (NAME & SURNAME)
(TITLE)
RARD INDUSTRIES COMPANY
2008-03-04 12:15 am
Dear Mr. ABC,

How are you? Let me first introduce myself. My name is Ms.EDI and I am working in RARD INDUSTRIES COMPANY.

We are sorry to inform you that Mr. KLKL is no longer working for RARD INDUSTRIES COMPANY. Please kindly direct any relevant queries to me in future.

Welcome to HK! I would like to take this chance to invite you to visit our office and showroom during your stay in HK. We have so many designs which I think you will definitely be interested. Our office hour is : 9-1 (am), 2-6 (pm). Once you arrive at HK, please feel free to give me a call during our office our. My office phone number is: 12345678.

Looking forward to meeting you !

Best Regards,


Ms. EDI
for RARD INDUSTRIES COMPANY


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