請幫我檢查這段英文交法(for resume)

Since 12 years old, I have started to pay attention
on arts things and created the special world by
myself. After completing F.5, I have been studying
in HK Design Of School that has brought me to an
upper level of big improvement in design concept
and expanding my ranges of experience.

With less than one month of graduation from now, I
have confidence and great passion in becoming a good
designer and I hope you will give me a chance. Thank
you for your considering my resume.



2008-03-01 22:45:57 補充：
MY ANSWER IS GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT. I WOULD WELCOME
ANYONE WHO CAN POINT OUT MY MISTAKES, IF ANY.

第一行, start------>started
第二行, 唔明create the special world係點解,但係只係計grammar,應該係created, studying------> studied at
第三行, bring----->brought, big improvement---------->the big improvement
第四行, expand--------->expanded, range--------->ranges

第五行, until graduate less than one month,你意思係咪仲差少於一個月就畢業呀?如果係,就改成, less than one month to graduate或者graduate in a couple weeks
第六行, good designer------->a good designer
第七行, looking--------->looking at

(唔好意思,我個人比較直,我覺得呢個resume唔係太得,有時間寫個第二個呀,如果唔o岩聽當我冇講過la,sorry)

When I was 12 years old,I start to pay attention on
art's things and create the special world by myself .After F.5,I study in HK Design Of School that can bring me to another new place,let me have big inprovement in design concepts and also expand my range of experience too.

Until graduate less than one month,Now I have confidence and full of passion to become a good designer and I hope you can give me a chance.Thx For Looking My Resume.


我改完嫁啦，but唔知種有冇錯!!