急!!!!(20點) 幫我釋做英文 可以嗎? (藝人相片)

我加多些少自己的句語，希望幫到你：
我覺得最錯就是電腦公司的人..I think the staff of the computer company should bear the most responsibility. They should be blamed.
在修理電腦時，他不應披露內裡的資料。When doing its maintenence, he should not disclose the information inside.
他們違犯了職業操守. His behaviour was against his professional ethics.
其實藝人就像普遍人一樣，也有自已的私生活, Actually, artists are the same as any ordinary people. They have their private life.
他們有權保留自己的私隱。And, they have rights to keep their privacy.
他們又不是專登影比人睇 Therefore they were not willing to have their photographs taken and disclosed to the public.
比人偷左佢地都唔想..They were surely very upset to know their photographs being stolen.

(我計過時，這些內容剛好講一分鐘。)



2008-03-01 12:26:03 補充：
Sorry, maintenence (wrong spelling). should be maintenance

2008-03-01 14:21:56 補充：
Sorry, private life should be private lives.

2008-03-03 21:11:31 補充：
多謝你選我做最佳回答，我嘗試改用些淺一點的字：
..should bear the most responsibility. 改為： should be responsible most.
When doing its maintenence 改為：When he repaired the computer,
His behaviour was against his professional ethics.改為：His deeds showed his bad conduct in his job.
photographs改為 photos

never mind..
exam左la..^^