幫我翻譯成英文

【你好!我叫xxx，現在十二歲，正就讀聖公會xxxx小學，我家有爸爸，媽媽和弟弟，相處得融洽。我知貴校設備完善、師資優良、校風良好，所以十分渴望,入讀本校。我的興趣是閱讀，而我最喜歡的科目是英文，我在這一方面也發展得不錯，我正在學校擔任課室圖書助理員。】的翻譯如下：

『 hello! I call xxx, now is 12 years old, is attending the saint consortia xxxx primary school, there are father, mother and younger brother in my house and get along with harmonious.I know the expensive school equipment is perfect, the teachers is good, the school tradition is good, so pretty much hope earnestly, go into a reading book school.My interest is a reading, and I the most subject is English, I also develop in this aspect good, I am holding the post of the member of the lesson room book assistant at school. 】

Good afternoon/morning! My name is XXX, I am twelve years old. I am
now studing in 聖公會xxxx小學. I live with my parents and my youngest
brother. We are very harmony. I know that your school facilities is very
good, and the teachers of this school are very nice and school spirit are really
excellent. So, I hope to study in your school.

My hobbies is read book, I am really interested about the story of the book. My best subject is English, it's also my favourite subject. I always get high marks in this subject.Now I am the librarian in my school.

同意樓上果位講法，太少。可能要加番啲話除左做圖書助理員之外，以前仲做過咩野......同埋牙爸牙媽做咩工...
最緊要系攞過咩獎牙!!!

Hello. I am xxx, now 12-year-old, studying at 聖公會xxxx小學. I am living with my dad, my mum and my younger brother, we are a happy family.
I would like to study at your school, knowing that you have perfect school facilities, qualified teachers and an excellent reputation.
I love readings. My favourite subject is English, and have a good performance in it. I am a librarian in school now.

Hello! I call xxx, now 12 years old, are going study the saint trade
union xxxx elementary school, my family has the daddy, mother and the
younger brother, is together harmoniously. I know the your school
well-equipped, the teachers fine, the school spirit am good, therefore
extremely longed for, enters the textbook school. My interest is
reading, but I most like the subject is an English, I on the one hand
also develop in this good, my school is holding the post of the
classroom books assistant.

Hello! I am xxx. I am now 12 years old. I am studying in 聖公會xxxx小學. My family have 4 members, my mother, my father, my brother and me. We are very harmony.
I heard that the facilities in this school very good, the teachers here are very nice and school spirit are really excellent. Therefore, I am really hope to study in your school.
My hobbies is reading. And my favourite subject is English. I think I did quite well is the subject. I am now library assistant in the calssroom in my primary school.




你的自我介紹不錯, 但卻太少了.