急20分,英文好既人快入,幫我改篇英文版既賣火柴的小女孩

2008-02-28 7:01 pm
幫我將英文版既賣火柴的小女孩改得滑稽一D丫.求下你地啦,我要交功課啊..仲有些少條件:

1) Change the story so that you write from the point of view of another
character.
2) Give the characters attitudes or behaviors that people have today
3) Use a modern setting
4) Give the story a new message and a different ending.

英文原文係呢條link度:
http://education.163.com/05/1014/09/200VM5TE00290164_4.html

其實唔一定改呢篇,都可以改其他童話故事
只要係童話故事就ok架啦..THX!!!
更新1:

我要長篇既,重申一次係要將個故事既setting同人物行為性格都要稍微改動一下 而且要搞笑既,唔一定係賣火柴的小女孩,只要係任何英文版童話故事就ok了! 感激不盡!!THX!!!!!^^

回答 (2)

2008-02-28 9:35 pm
✔ 最佳答案
In a corner formed by two houses, one of which projected beyond the other. She sat down, drawing her little feet close under her, but in vain, she could not warm them but she could play with those matches. She would to build a model, and she was thinking what she should build. Finally, she decided to build her home that she dared not go after her mother died. Her father personality dramatically changed after his beloved wife passed her way.

While she built the model, more and more pedestrians stopped and wondered the girl was doing. After she finished, the crowd hailed for her model. One of the generous old gentleman, with grey hair and tidy black suit, was amazed by her patience and concentration, decided to buy that beautiful model.

The girl could not believed her eyes, the generous duke would like to buy her model. The girl held the coins in her hand with warm and grateful heart. But on her face, she looked sad and the gentleman asked her why. The girl hesitated but she decided to tell the gentle old man. It was because she sought help from the duke about her father mentality.

The duke sent his doctor to see the father and he decided to send him to the hospital for a period of time. The duke agreed to serve as guardian for the girl until her father recovered.

2008-02-28 13:37:42 補充:
The last paragraph amended:

The duke sent his doctor to see the sick father and he decided to send him to the hospital till his condition was stable. The father was worried while he was away and the duke agreed to serve as guardian for the girl until her father recovered.
2008-02-28 7:35 pm
One evening, I was walking down the street and saw a little girl selling
matches. I felt sorry for her because the weather was very cold and it was
snowing. That little girl wore a few clothes and she was shivering in the
cold. I went near her and asked her to go to my home to have some
hot soup. She nodded and followed me back home. At my home, my
mother prepared some hot beef soup and a piece of bread for her.
The little girl was very grateful. My sister let the little girl sleep in her bed.
The little girl left our place the next morning.


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