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Finally we left shopping mall, I see there were some food stalls in the shopping mall.I bought fish balls, I was give some fish balls to her.her refused to eat,.. Had discovered in opposite street paparazzi she, and patted then picture with the camera... Looked this magazine, lucy is very unhappy At that time I also thought very much sorry her
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1. TENSE不正確, 突然PAST, 突然PRESENT TENSE 2. VOICE不正確, "我比D野人" 點解會變左 " I WAS GIVE" 變成左PASSIVE VOICE? 3. 點解會係用"HER" 放係句子頭做SUBJECT. 而唔係"SHE REFUSED TO EAT" 4. 咩叫"LOOKED THIS MAGAZINE"? PASSIVE VOICE 雜誌被看?
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5. 原文係要譯"對不起她" , 唔係直譯"SORRY" 第一, 冇SORRY HER, 第二,就算係用SORRY, 都要係SORRY FOR HER, 但都唔係 "對唔住佢"既意思, 只有"為佢感到難過"既意思 6.仲有每句句子都唔係完整
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仲有千百萬樣GRAMMAR 錯, 有冇人可以答到我點解會有十幾廿個網友可以揀到D咁既答案出黎? 我好想知道原因。 真係好希望有人會同我身同感受, 同埋唔該YAHOO 知識可以好少少, 起碼唔好有D咁難頂既答案出現下嘛?