作英文情詩----英文高手..plz.........急

Sleepless nights with you in my mind,
Can't find anyone like you, so fine!
Your fair complexion sparkles like stars,
Your sweet laughters and thoughtful words last.
My heart jumps when you are near,
My affection for you is growing here.
On one in this world has ever trilled me like you,
And, you will be my true love the years through.
Our love will last till endless years,
Till our wrinkles slowly appear.
----------then ,
Come and stay in my heart forever,
Embrace my honest love here and after.


2008-02-27 00:32:21 補充：
我是 doris chan31, 這首英文詩是我花了很多心機，自己創作的，以前有個網友要求幫手，作首情詩，我作了這首給他，他寧願選另一個回答者的建議，到網站由各首詩處抄襲，我想他的收情詩者知道作品從何而來，也不會欣賞。現在輪到你諸多猜疑，真是好心沒好報，以後我也不會再作詩了！你給的 5 分不是很大，我作詩也是為興趣，不是為了激氣的！