可唔可以幫我作ROLE MODEL??20分!!急用

Everyone has role model, includign me as well. Now, I am going to tell you something about my role model. He is called Hacken Lee, who is a well-known singer (and won the most popular male star in 2006.)

　　He was a normal boy and was not good at singing at all before. Although he had won the first prize in the 18-districts singing competition, he realized that he also had rooms to improve. So afterwards he studied a senior singing course for improvement, which paved a path to today’s success.

　　His determination to improve himself is worth learning. When we want to improve, we need to work it out instead of imaging how well you are if you do improve. That’s what I have learnt from him and want to share.

咁難...
我都唔識呀..
幫唔到你啦..