[20分] 幫手寫100字悔過書

Dear Miss XXX,

I am very sorry for saying such inappropriate language in front of you. I acted very impulsively but I'll try to control my temper and never say such things again. If there is anything I can do to make up for it I will do it from the bottom of my heart. Once again, I deeply regret my behaviour and hope that you can accept my sincere apology.


Most deep regrets,

Student 4765

好心候選編號 002 果位唔好扮曬野啦 001已經唔識英文
002 仲要扮到好識咁
你地唔該寫悔過書諗下你地d英文程度啦
用網上字典直譯既人唔好係到誤導人啦
淨係一句" I can hard saying vulgar what habits give up!" 已經完全冇grammar可言,亦都冇意思係入面
唔該返去幼稚園讀過啦

I am very very sorry! Hand a cass that day.I say vulgar whats to you.Because act on impulse.Excuse for,forgive my behavior.I will change my temper hard ! I can hard saying vulgar what habits give up! Please accept my apologies!

根據樓上.....
我覺得d 字唔使咁深..........
vulag 同apologies 轉返sorry 得了
句子唔使咁深...
錯下d grammar 更佳.....
因為太好會比miss 覺得係抄既.......

最好方法就好似上面咁..抄sorry....唔好只係抄100個...抄夠500或1000個比佢(反正超快,而且容易)咁效果同寫一篇好文都差唔多,個miss 都會接受

(XD..旁門左道...XDDDDDDD)

樓上既letter 係比較高form 既會岩用...

而佢只要求寫100字,應該唔係高form掛(高form 應該500)
咁個miss 應該唔會太記住.......

不過最好都係抄樓上一次..然後不斷抄sorry........XD
le個雖然明知唔係自己作,但係個miss 應該都會好開心的.....XD


ps選最住唔好選我..我只係跟樓上來寫......XD

2008-03-03 19:44:58 補充：
即使grammar 錯晒又點,如果全對,咁又係咪反映唔係自己作,
再講罰抄其實旨在抄,

入面d 內容根本無咩人會認真睇

所以我先建議 抄>100 次sorry 或者會更好

原本只係建議下,而且每一次都用心打,但係咁都會比人話,睇來真係唔應該來
咁唯有返去幼稚園了,無法了,人地有料都唔show,



如果我檢舉的話,就請連上面一齊...我只係維護我的建議,更何況上面都唔似真係比意見

XXmiss:
I am very very sorry! Hand a cass that day.I say vulgar whats to you.Because act on impulse.Excuse for,forgive my behavior.I will change my temper hard ! I can hard saying vulgar what habits give up! Please accept my apologies!

student
XXXXXX


XXmiss:
我非常對不起!在那天上課,我對你說粗俗話。是因為一時沖動.請原諒、諒解我的行為.我會努力改我的脾氣 ! 我也會努力把說粗俗話的習慣改掉! 請接受我的道歉!

學生
( 你的名字)



雖然字數不多,但我可用了35分鐘以上! 如果你想效果高你可以抄100個 very sorry