可唔可以幫我譯做英文呀? (我要面試梁式芝書院和景嶺書院)

My name is xxx.I am XX years old.I live in Lantian. I set up the elementary school in the sea dam street official to go study. When space, I can read and paint pictures. I most like the book is a child which pursues the kite. My interest is plays the badminton and looks at the documentary film. But I most like the subject is the beautiful fatigue, because the beautiful fatigue may make oneself to display the creativity, but also may practice own on the paper idea.

我覺得你可以講多D閱讀對你既好處,因為宜家D學校好注重學生對閱讀既興趣。
你要講點解你想入這間中學?在這間學校讀書可以幫助我ＸＸ方面的發展。
例如:我報讀這間學校既原因係因為貴校注重體育,我擅長跑步和各項田徑,所以我覺得我適合就讀貴校

希望你可以成功,加油呀!!!

第一位仁兄既翻法 好似唔多穩妥
grammar 好似怪怪地
似放上翻譯網多過自己寫
同埋 追風箏的孩子 = the kite runner

如果去interview的話
最好prep.埋
點解想入呢間學校
或者你以前join過咩課外活動、有咩得益呢d題目
小小意見 希望幫到你
祝你面試成功!

My name is XXX, i am XX years old, i lived in lam Tin. I previously studied at Hoi Pa Street Government Primary School. When i had leisure time, i like reading and painting. My favourite book is called "The Kite Runner". My hobbies are playing badminton and watching documentary movie, and my farvourite subject is Art, because it can show my creativeness and draw what i want on a paper to make my ideals come true.




Hope i can help you

我唸你應該係講緊自我介紹,係咪?
我覺得你咁講又好似講得太多自己既興趣。
你其實可以講下點解你會選擇呢間學校，而呢間學校有乜配套可以在學業上幫到你，咁你入到呢間中學既機會就會大d啦
(我覺得道理上同見工一樣，學校唔會太願意深入了解每一個學生的性格，佢地會更加想知呢個學生可以對學校有乜貢獻)