請問做過兩份工的求職信應怎樣寫, 要英文, thanks!

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2008-02-16 9:20 pm

我做過兩份工，一份只做了半年，一份做了差不多四年，我想問封求職信應該點寫？次序係咪應該咁︰

1. 在那裡畢業
2. 寫做左四年個份工
3. 做了半年個份工(係咪要寫呢？)

With reference to your advertisement on your website, I am writing to apply for the post of xxx.
I was graduated from XXXX
I have worked as a XXX at XXX company for almost 4 years. My job duties are XXXXX. Before my present employment, I have worked as a XXX at XXX company to help in XXXX.

係咪應該咁寫呢？

同埋我想問係0個間公司個website見到份工，應該係咪好似上面咁寫？

Thanks a lot !

回答 (1)

用戶7743

2008-02-16 9:36 pm

✔ 最佳答案

This letter is rather okay. However, as you have been working for almost 5 years, I would suggest you to say more about the last job. The experience and knowledge you got from the last job will more or less dedicate how much interest from the new employer to arrange an interview for you. Of course, it's important that the experience is relevant to the job you are applying for.

Thus, please see if the below is better?

With reference to your advertisement on your website, I am writing to apply for the post of XXX.

I was the (post) at (the 2nd) company for almost 4 years. My job duties are XXXX (try your best to tell more to prove your strength and relevance to the new job). Before my present employment, I was hired by XXX (1st company) as a XXX (post).

Academically, I graduated from XXX. (If possible, highlight some better subject results).

I wish that I can be considered a candidate of this vacancy and granted an interview at your convenience.

Yours sincerely,
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