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The book tells a horror story. Tom is an inept guitar play. But things change after he bought a old guitar from a secondhand shop. He seems to be blessed with certain mysterious force and plays the guitar like a genius when he plays on it. But at the same time he seems to act like another person with a much darker and more violent personality. This puzzles his friends. Later, Tom's girlfriend Katy finds out the horrible truth about what has happened to the former owner of the guitar. She was terrified to feel that the same horrible things may be happening to Tom now.
At the end of the story , Katy destroys the guitar, to help Tom back to normal life.

2. I will rate the story 7 points out of 10, as I do not like the ending very much.
If I was to rewrite the story, I would do away with the storyline that involves Katy. Katy destroys the guitar and drives away the ghost because she wants her boyfriend to return to his normal personality who is a gentle guy, but an lousy guitar player. If Katy is removed from the story, Tom may help fullful the wish of the ghost befre he parts with it peacefully. He can even stage a band show in Stel City! This is indeed a happy ending.

1.This book is actually a spirit's story, the content is probably to say what protagonist inferior TOM original guitar played is not good , but since after buying an old guitar in the secondhand shop , he changes, so long as pick up the guitar , the temper will become very irritable , but guitar play very well, friend of him in a puzzle, because knot of him he to play very ordinary usually, after girlfriend of tom katy learns the miserable experience of the original host of this guitar, she is extraordinary and afraid, because history seems to be recuring
Girlfriend katy of tom he destroy knot finally, reply tom in the past the same

2.The story 10 I, department of full marks than 7 of him, because final result of story enough well
If can rewrite story in order to me, I will take these role of Katy away in the story, because these story means that Katy becomes boyfriend Zuo and returns to tenderness in the past. Though the boyfriend play and form him well strength , well want to become irritable, hit finally? Left pairs of knot he. Only the spirit has left his boyfriend too. I take Katy the role away, boyfriend can help pieces of ghost finish ideal, may satisfied with oneself on one hand, it can be that stel city open band show! !
Pieces of ghost oneself finally,etc. leave , story the heavy round final result of garden satisfied

1. That the book is actually a ghost story, which is about said protagonist of the original guitar bomb TOM Despite a so-so, but since the old stuff in the shop and bought an old guitar, he changed, as long as one took up the guitar , will become very hot temper, but the guitar is a very good bomb, and his friends are puzzling, because he's usually the harp guitar is very unusual, when the tom's girlfriend katy learned of the original guitar the owner's plight, she is very scared, because it seems that history is repeating itself
Finally tom girlfriend katy guitar damage to the back as usual tom

2. This story full marks of 10 points if I than seven minutes, the outcome of the story not good enough
If so, I can rewrite the story, I will be the story took Katy this role, because this story is that Katy boyfriend left for the change to the previous tender. Boyfriend Although Drainage Well freshened his guitar playing, but the Drainage become Wuxiang irascible, Lan left to fight the results guitar. only ghosts also left his boyfriend. Katy I took the role, drainage boyfriend ghost can only help complete the ideals on the one hand and satisfy his can of stel city opened band show!
Finally, and so only to meet their own ghost to leave, that is the story of change Osono round outcome

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2008-02-13 18:24:30 補充：
1. That the book is actually a ghost story, which is about said protagonist of the original guitar bomb TOM Despite a so-so, but since the old stuff in the shop and bought an old guitar,

2008-02-13 18:25:02 補充：
he changed, as long as one took up the guitar , will become very hot temper, but the guitar is a very good bomb, and his friends are puzzling, because he's usually the harp guitar is very unusual,

2008-02-13 18:25:20 補充：
when the tom's girlfriend katy learned of the original guitar the owner's plight, she is very scared, because it seems that history is repeating itself Finally tom girlfriend katy guitar damage to the back as usual tom

2008-02-13 18:26:19 補充：
2. This story full marks of 10 points if I than seven minutes, the outcome of the story not good enough If so, I can rewrite the story, I will be the story took Katy this role, because this story is that Katy boyfriend left for the change to the previous tender.

2008-02-13 18:26:41 補充：
Boyfriend Although Drainage Well freshened his guitar playing, but the Drainage become Wuxiang irascible, Lan left to fight the results guitar. only ghosts also left his boyfriend. Katy I took the role,

2008-02-13 18:27:01 補充：
drainage boyfriend ghost can only help complete the ideals on the one hand and satisfy his can of stel city opened band show! Finally, and so only to meet their own ghost to leave, that is the story of change Osono round outcome