英文作文一問(可以唔洗幫作)(20點呢)

2008-02-10 5:38 am
係一篇imaginative story
but anyway 我冇咩ideas
想大家幫幫手
個作文題目係咁既 有張圖片http://www.flickr.com/photos/23585388@N05/?saved=1

根據題目 我應該點作呢之後 內容?? 可以安排小小特別or gag?
thz a lot
更新1:

第一個idea 太偶發性.... 突然死左??!! 第二個idea... 篇野要跟著個rule 去做 i am sammy and the crocodile have gone ... i want to know is how the story continue??

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第二個答題者.. 你作得唔錯..我本來諗著自己作...你咁樣...搞到我又冇得作 呵呵 anyway thanks a lot

回答 (2)

2008-02-10 9:06 am
✔ 最佳答案
Sammy found the house was in a wrecked state, with all furnitures being scratched and bitten and soaked in water.
Sammy instinctively ran into the bathroom where the crocodile was kept, but the crocodile was no where to be found.
Sammy saw the wide-opened window and panicked. Could the crocodile be at large in Kong Tong Estate?
Sammy searched every corner in the house in hopes of finding the crocodile. Although he knew the crocodile was more likely to be outside, Sammy wanted to be sure it wasn't in the house.
Finally, Sammy gave up and went outside. The residents at the Kong Tong Estate greeted Sammy, which gave Sammy the impression that nothing bad had happened. So Sammy moved even quicker, hoping he would find the corcodile before any damage was being done.
When Sammy reached the Kong Tong Lake, he saw the lake was packed with people. Sammy suddenly felt uneasy, and thought the sight must be caused by the crocodile.
And yes, Sammy was right! The crocodile was the center of attraction! Though unlike what's in Sammy's mind, the crocodile was pulling tricks, and people who were fishing there earlier on were amused, and decided to feed the crocodile with the fish they'd caught.
The greedy little thing wanted more snacks, so it tried its best to impress the audience. That's the reason why many people were attracted and gathered around the crocodile.
'Ha!' Sammy thought. 'Those were the tricks I taught the crocodile when it was little. I thought it must have forgotten by now. But look! That's my crocodile, my dearest friend!'
Sammy slipped through the people in front of him, and went towards the crocodile. The crocodile recognised Sammy's odour, and made haste to Sammy.
Sammy kneeled down and pet the crocodile's head.
'Let's go home, dinner is ready.' Sammy said.
The crocodile hesitated, since it enjoyed the great outdoor best.
Sammy made a promise, 'I will bring you here everyday, and you can have it all while I am at school. How's that?'
The crocodile seemed to have understood and followed Sammy.
Sammy realised his promise and brought the crocodile to the lake everyday regardless of the weather. With such a charming neighbour , Kong Tong Estate is never the same again.
2008-02-10 6:07 am
1)you can say a man keep a crocodile since it was small, but time pass by, it grew bigger and bigger and eat the man.

2)there is a man that love crocodile very much, he has many books about it, one day when he woke up he
found that he became a crocodile but he can still speak human's lanuage(?). he was very happy. He found his neighbor to tell them the case. After that, his job is to tell human what his crocodile friends think and the estate is famous.
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