A loser in love,
Has nowhere to go.
Never been in love,
Don't know how to love.
How much can she pay,
For the courage she lacks?
How much does it cost,
To give up her pride?
Listening to love songs,
Is like a daily chores.
Heard it, sing it,
But still, no reward.
Longing, yearning, waiting,
For the one true love to come.
Staring, Standing, Stoning,
Like an idiot in the crowd.
Teach her people, teach her now.
Not to be afraid of love and how.
Tell her, guide her, be patience with her,
For all she does is being nervous.
She needs to be relax and learn to be calm,
But her mind and heart just refuse to show how.
She wants love and yearns to be loved,
But still remains a loser in love.
A Loser In Love?
2008-02-09 4:22 am
回答 (16)
2008-02-09 6:30 am
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Listening to love songs,Is like a daily chores.
Heard it, sing it,
But still, no reward.
Longing, yearning, waiting,
For the one true love to come.
Staring, Standing, Stoning,
Like an idiot in the crowd.
haha, Is this your frustration in life...
well, you could always compensate that with the use of your superior poem-making expertise.
Bravo! I'd rate it a five out of five
2008-02-09 4:26 am
That's a very nice poem about a young girl waiting for love.
2008-02-09 9:01 pm
Very nice,
2008-02-09 11:56 am
Yes it is a nice poem
2008-02-09 5:21 am
Very nice. I think that this could relate to may things, even if it was meant to relate to one. That's the beauty of peotry - it can relate to everything.
2008-02-09 4:44 am
I like it but in the first stanza, you say love to much.
hope i helped.
A loser in love,
Has nowhere to go.
Never wants to be shoved
Doesn't know how to lead
Doesn't know how to pay,
For the courage she lacks.
How much could she take,
To give up her pride?
But other than the original stanza i like it a lot.
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hope i helped.
A loser in love,
Has nowhere to go.
Never wants to be shoved
Doesn't know how to lead
Doesn't know how to pay,
For the courage she lacks.
How much could she take,
To give up her pride?
But other than the original stanza i like it a lot.
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Aub90.Uv0jAaElgbVKDSGX_sy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20080208202536AA5Ztx9
2008-02-09 4:42 am
I think it is a very nice poem.
2008-02-09 4:36 am
i think it is a very good poem and it sounds like a typical young girl
there is some grammar that you might want to fix though
there is some grammar that you might want to fix though
2008-02-09 6:01 am
Lovely. You are a Poet and Don't Know it. There are No loosers or Winners in LOVE. Love is a Gift and you either have it or you don't. If you do not Love Yourself, you have nothing to give! LOVE IS!!!!
2016-10-07 2:23 pm
Whoa! The oracle is vicious! I do think of love is pretend. that's in basic terms a temperary chemical imbalance (that's backed with the aid of technology btw) and long term love is greater delight than "love". purely locate the guy that suits you superb and get married. that's that straightforward.
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