英文文法一問

你的第一句
Grillian photos a controversial sex movie
(句子無動詞-Verb, 此外句子意思令人不明)

第二句
also she (was criticism) by us.
criticism 係noun , 應該為用過去分詞 / past particple
應該係 was criticized by (過去式-被動 / past tense - passive voice)
中文解(經常always)成為茶餘話題, 你5好用past tense,最要用present tense

老實講
你的英文水準考HKCEE 危D

順便講khhui001的句子
Gillian was taken some controversial sex movie (and) everyone talks about this topic everyday.
由於用(and)句子需要平衡,前面用嘜時式,後面相對要用相同時式,由於時式不同,最好分番兩句好D.
Gillian was taken some controversial sex movie. Everyone talks about this topic everyday

我覺得你個句有怪怪地. 如果以文法上應該唔會有的.

但如果是我, 我會這樣寫.

Gillian was taken some controversial sex movie and everyone talks about this topic everyday.

我已離開HKCEE好耐了, 所以唔知你得唔得. 只覺得難道你可以係HKCEE用咁多難字咩. 我認為應該用一d簡單既字. 因為用難字未必一定講得中要講既野.

都係等高手為你解答啦.