呢個文章中又mistake!!老師話要correct翻!!! Thx!!!
one day, when I was going our for lunch with my family,there was loud thunder
and bright lighthing.We went back to the hotel [quick] because we did not want to
has a cold!
用[ ]括住左!!!佢係要correct翻D乜牙?????
THX!!!!!
又再問英文!!!! Thx x 1000000000!!!
2008-01-30 1:07 am
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2008-01-30 1:28 am
✔ 最佳答案
One day, when I was going out for lunch with my family, there was thunderand lightning. We quickly went back to the hotel, because we did not want to
catch a cold!
- Misspelling for [out] and [lightning]
- [Thunder and lightning] should be used together, and [loud] and [bright] is not necessary because it is pretty obvious.
- I moved [quickly] to the front to make the sentence sounds better.
- It's [catch a cold] instead a [has a cold].
Hope the correction and explanation help!
2008-01-30 1:17 am
Try consider this:-
One day, when I was going ouT for lunch with my family, there WERE loud thunders AND lightNing FLASHES. We went back to the hotel QUICKLY because we did not want to CATCH a cold IN THE COMING RAINSTORM!
One day, when I was going ouT for lunch with my family, there WERE loud thunders AND lightNing FLASHES. We went back to the hotel QUICKLY because we did not want to CATCH a cold IN THE COMING RAINSTORM!
2008-01-30 1:15 am
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